Hi Lovely ARC Team!
Thank you for being part of this. I now have ten lovely peeps on board. You are all very special to me and I hope you can help successfully launch Lottie Saves the Turtles in time for the Easter break. I know you are are very busy people and I do  respect your other commitments and appreciate your time. 

I have now received the edited manuscript for Lottie Saves the Turtle from Rachel Mann and I’ve since re-written parts and finished my corrections like a swotting school kid. 
Here’s what she said: 

'I really enjoyed this! I said it last time too, but I can really see your writing developing, and you taking all of our previous work on board – well done! I don’t think there are any major overhauls to be made to this one (you’ve just about got away with squeezing an awful lot in) Any tweaks will really be at line level. I love the all-too-timely plastic pollution message (though I think it could be heightened in the plot), and your setting is really rich and imaginative.'

I'm pleased with her editing and suggestions. Your suggestions about the plot and any aspects of the story are valued too.I’d appreciate you pointing out any typos or extra spacing. I’ve already spotted one on Chapter 17 with extra spacing on Ru-B-Loos! Dashes are terrible little gremlins! 
I hope you enjoy Lottie Saves the Turtles and I value your feedback.

Here is the link.

There are no illustrations at this stage as I haven't finished them all yet. Let me know if you experience any trouble receiving the book.

Email me any comments or ideas no matter how small, your opinions will be taken on board. Look at the blurb too.
I could do with these within the next two weeks so I have time to make adjustments. Let's set a  deadline of
Saturday 23rd March. (or earlier if possible) Please don't forward the link to friends as it is under strict copyright to Heather B. Moon author. This is for your eyes only.

 Happy reading and I hope you enjoy your imaginative journey to the beautiful Caribbean island of Wadadidili.

 Speak soon!

Heather xx


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